Do you think the conversation I wrote is imaginable?

Honest, your writing is good. All of the thoughts in between are good and believable. But your dialogue does need a little work. Not to make a pun or anything but its kind of mechanical. Your addressing the reader too much. For example, you dive into the introduction of robots into the conversation because you want the reader to know they are a topic of concern in your story, I don't want to be able to tell something like that as someone reading your story. That being said I really did like it, I'm wondering if you have a link where I could read more or something...?